Sunday, July 19, 2009

念

那一年我
倦了, 累了
也忘了
幸福的滋味
我常在雨中哭泣
你看不见我的泪
却知道我
思念 想念 挂念 留念
心里
念念不忘的
还是你..

1 comment:

  1. lol, I jumped to the latest post to see.. Okay gua, a lot improvement in terms of length and meaning... I am looking forward to better pieces. ^^

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